[QUOTE=Silly Puppy]I like you to come to my hotel. Wo sihuan ni lai wo de fan tien.. ??
How much is for the whole night? Short time?
You must stay until I let you go
Thanks guy... Happy mongering[/QUOTE]
You're translating English to Chinese word for word instead of translating the whole phrase... Whether someone will understand you is about a 50/50 bet...
A couple of better ways to say "I want you to come to my hotel."
Wo xiang ni he wo yi qi qu jiudian. (I want you and I together go hotel)
Wo zai jiudian, ni guo lai, hao bu hao? (I'm at the hotel, come here, good or not good?)